Switching up the Story

So I decided to switch up my short story.

I felt like my older idea couldn't fit into Man v. Man conflict, so I am instead going with another idea, which I have written into a draft.

It's about a man watching another man and a woman talk. He narrates the story, seeing how both the man and the woman really want to have a true conversation, but can't, and therefore resolve not to talk at all.

The outside man views this, and reflects on it.

It's less crazy than my last idea, but it could be okay.


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